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你和班上的同学在周日去敬老院帮助照顾老人。请你根据以下信息，写一篇英文日记。写作内容：活动安排内容1. 时间：日 星期日8:30启程，共进午餐后返回2. 地点：校门口集中，一个半小时自行车车程目的地：敬老院（the Nursing Home）3. 活动：亲切交谈、为老人表演节目、赠送礼物、拍照留念感受……写作要求：词数80-120个。&注意：日记的开头已写好。December 1st Sunday 2010 Fine______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Today we went to the Nursing Home to help take care of the old people .At 8:30 am, we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half. Soon after we got to the Nursing Home, where many old people are staying, we began to chat with them to see how their life is going, and then we sang songs and danced for them. We also presented our gifts, took lots of photos and had lunch together before we came back. I feel very great to see the old people living so happily in the Nursing Home where they are taken good care of.这是一篇日记，时态为过去时。文章的要点已经给出，同学在写作时不要遗漏。在写个人感受时可以适当发挥，多运用好的词汇如present等等。同时注意也要用一些好的连接词让文章更流畅一点。
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据魔方格专家权威分析，试题“你和班上的同学在周日去敬老院帮助照顾老人。请你根据以下信息，..”主要考查你对&&提纲作文&&等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：
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第一步：审题： 审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在，在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。审好题会让我们做到“磨刀不误砍柴工”，审题时要做到以下几点： （1）审要求：书面表达试题一般都由“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分，以“注意”形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求。因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点。 （2）审文体：高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等。审题时要审清文体，注意格式上的不同，避免出错。 （3）审人称：审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是“由谁写给谁”的。写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的“某人”，如“假设你是李华”，写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华。而读者对象有时没有明示，要考生自己去进行判断。 （4）审时态：根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事，过去的就用过去时。比如日记，是叙述过去发生的事情，自然用过去时；通知多用将来时。 第二步：抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲： 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全。通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲。 第三步：选词组句：在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。 第四步：连句成篇：根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚。 第五步：复查纠错： 通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求。最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误。 第六步：书写规范，卷面整洁：书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
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短文开头：We did a survey about three activities in our school.Here are the results.Among fifty students in my class,20 of them agree that students should wear school uniforms,while......
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We did a survey about three activities in our school.Here are the results.
Among fifty students are in my class,20 of them agree that students should wear uniforms,while the others do not think that it is important to wear the uniforms in the school. I thought wearing uniforms are essential. In my opnion, as a student in the school, wearing uniform is a signal which stands for society identity .but also, the common dress could have the visitors make a good impressive to the school.
Then.about surfing the internet, 20 pencentage of students disagree, However, 80 pencentage of students agree strongly to surf the internet using computers. I see surfing the internet should be considered in the school. In the 21st century, network is a significant tool in the everyone's life. It is good for student to learn how
to search information and use E-mail in the internet.
Thirdly, student also have different ideas about studying in groups. 35 of them agree while the other students do not,.studying in group is a excellent plan,I thought. studying together is positive affect for people. classmates could learn the knowledge they do not know from other people,improving their drawback of study, In the other hand, a better relationship would be in the group.
In the end, the three activities are all good for students, They are worth carring out,
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假李美暑假参加伦敦举办英语习班请根据内容参考词汇用英语写封信给父母60词语左右
1.已校星期
2.介绍每校所做事情
3.介绍伦敦气
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5.校评价 参考词汇:beautiful.
do sports.
be friendly.
come from.
talk in English. have
a good time.
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Dear mumand dad:
I have been arriving at shool a week.i had a good time here.we talk in Englishat school,and sometimes we do s[ports in the morning.London is a big cityand the weather is changeable,so people in London always have an umbrella with them.Our classmate was very fridenly.they come from different countries ,but there was a time that we got along well.they can help me when
I got in trouble.I like my life in London.
YoursLi mei
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太给力了，你的回答完美地解决了我的问题，非常感谢！
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