英语大神帮忙看看流量大神有没有用过的错误的!!谢谢!

英语学霸们来看看这里面有没有语法或顺序的错误,一定采纳,谢谢! _百度作业帮
英语学霸们来看看这里面有没有语法或顺序的错误,一定采纳,谢谢!
英语学霸们来看看这里面有没有语法或顺序的错误,一定采纳,谢谢!&
第三行逗号后面为什么是大写
而且应该是maybe someone
谢谢提醒,还有别的吗?
嗯,为什么是someone maybe?
afraid 跟to
灰常感谢!请英语大神帮忙看一下有没有语法错误,有些句子如果用的不恰当希望能帮忙改一下,谢谢!
As is subtly depicted in the drawing, a small lamp is shining. The oil lamp with a lovely smile and lighten the dark surroundings._百度作业帮
请英语大神帮忙看一下有没有语法错误,有些句子如果用的不恰当希望能帮忙改一下,谢谢!
As is subtly depicted in the drawing, a small lamp is shining. The oil lamp with a lovely smile and lighten the dark surroundings.
请英语大神帮忙看一下有没有语法错误,有些句子如果用的不恰当希望能帮忙改一下,谢谢!& &As is subtly depicted in the drawing, a small lamp is shining. The oil lamp with a lovely smile and lighten the dark surroundings. The litter light is naturally
the darkness epitomizes people who get in troubles. Therefore, when someone is exposed to drawbacks we should give them some help.& Consider Jack, my ten years old brother, who is a schoolboy and poor in Chinese course. Last term he only got 50 in Chinese course. So I decided to give him some help. In summer holidays, I teach him how to write a good competition and assistant him to deal with problems in his homework. Last week, he told me a good news. In a recent Chinese exam, he got 90! Though I only give him a litter help, he got such big success.&&Accordingly,it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the thought-provoking drawing. When we help others we are also get happiness. It is important for us to show love care to people who go through a bad patch. I believe the significant way to help others is give them confidence and do our best to give them some help.
1.Last week,he told me a piece of good news.In a recent Chinese exam,he got 90!Though I only gave him a litter help,he got such big success.2.It is important for us to show love care to people who are going through a bad patch.3 .I believe the significant way to help others is give them confidence and do our best to give them what they need首先 第一句,News是不可数,所以改一下,用a piece of news 第二我帮助他是过去时,所以用gave其次,第二第三句,总体没错,我只是照自己的感觉改了一下下~感觉你写的挺好的~!英语大神来帮我看看我这几段对话写的有没有问题?有的话请帮我改正,谢谢! ——In Europe英语大神来帮我看看我这几段对话写的有没有问题?有的话请帮我改正,谢谢!——In Europe,it is no_百度作业帮
英语大神来帮我看看我这几段对话写的有没有问题?有的话请帮我改正,谢谢! ——In Europe英语大神来帮我看看我这几段对话写的有没有问题?有的话请帮我改正,谢谢!——In Europe,it is no
英语大神来帮我看看我这几段对话写的有没有问题?有的话请帮我改正,谢谢! ——In Europe英语大神来帮我看看我这几段对话写的有没有问题?有的话请帮我改正,谢谢!——In Europe,it is normal to be like this:if you like women,you wouldn't like to kiss men,because they don'if you like both men and women,then you can kiss both of them.If you kiss someone,it's due to the sexual desire that appeal to you.——Kissing is never about friendship.——Do you mean that I can seduce you?——Yes
没啥事儿,就是问候一下。
感觉好中式英语啊
不像正常的英语
eye应该改为复数 like both改为both like
中式英语= =谁能用英语帮翻译下
在问题补充里面的话! 本人急用谢谢大家了!·亲爱的我不知道你现在是怎么想的!但是我就想牵着你的手走一去一直走下去走到最后看看我们究竟有没有错究竟错在哪里?_百度作业帮
谁能用英语帮翻译下
在问题补充里面的话! 本人急用谢谢大家了!·亲爱的我不知道你现在是怎么想的!但是我就想牵着你的手走一去一直走下去走到最后看看我们究竟有没有错究竟错在哪里?
谁能用英语帮翻译下
在问题补充里面的话! 本人急用谢谢大家了!·亲爱的我不知道你现在是怎么想的!但是我就想牵着你的手走一去一直走下去走到最后看看我们究竟有没有错究竟错在哪里?
Honey,I've no idea what you're thinking about it now.Yet,I just wannt hold your hand and walk down on the road of our life,to see whether we did something wrong or not,and to see on earth where we did it wrong.楼上的最后一句有点儿问题.
My dear,I don't know how you think.But I just want to hold your hand to walk arround and untill the end of our life.See whether we have mistake,and what's the mistake.
Darling,I don't know your thought now, but I want to go with you, go with you forever, and see whether we are wrong or what is wrong?请各位英语达人帮我看一下这篇作文有没有错误,如果有的话请帮我改一下,谢谢!Everyone has a lot of dreams .Some people want to be rich. Some people want to be famous. I have a dream, too. When I was a small child, I had a _百度作业帮
请各位英语达人帮我看一下这篇作文有没有错误,如果有的话请帮我改一下,谢谢!Everyone has a lot of dreams .Some people want to be rich. Some people want to be famous. I have a dream, too. When I was a small child, I had a
请各位英语达人帮我看一下这篇作文有没有错误,如果有的话请帮我改一下,谢谢!Everyone has a lot of dreams .Some people want to be rich. Some people want to be famous. I have a dream, too. When I was a small child, I had a dream that one day I would become a great pianist. I will play the piano in the Musikvereinin Vienna to make the best music for the whole world. When l was three years old, my parents help me please a teacher. She is very beautiful and kind. She told me how to play the piano and how to make the music sound better. When l learned two months time, I thought play the piano very difficult. After learning my arms are very acid, but I did not give up. Now, I’m twelve years old. I still want to be a pianist. I did a lot for the dream. I spend more than two hours playing the piano every day. It’s very hard, but I insist it for nine years. No mill, no meal. Now I in the Grade Examination of musical level of current year for nonprofessionals and have reached the 9th.grade in the playing of Piano. Piano is a kind of music. It helps me learn something of music. Become a piano play is a hard job. I will be harder and harder to practice it. I believe I can do it.
Everyone has a lot of dreams .Some people want to be rich.Some people want to be famous.(Some people want to be rich while others want to be famous).I have a dream,too.When I was a small child(When I was a little kid),I had a dream that one day I would become a great pianist.I will(would) play the piano in the Musikvereinin Vienna to(去掉to,改成and) make the best music for the whole world.When l was three years old,my parents help me please a teacher(my parents paid a teacher for teaching me playing the piano).She is very beautiful and kind.She told me how to play the piano and how to make the music sound better.When l learned two months time(After learning about two months),I thought play the piano very difficult(改成I thought it is very difficult to play the piano).After learning my arms are very acid(去掉这句,改成 I felt my arms acid ),but I did not give up.Now,I’m twelve years old.I still want to be a pianist.I did a lot for the dream(加上to be a pianist )and I spend(改成spent) more than two hours playing the piano every day.It’s very hard,but I insist (加上on practicing )it(去掉) for nine years.No mill,no meal.Now I(I’m) in the Grade Examination of musical level of current year for nonprofessionals(这句话我没懂你要表达什么,所以没改) and have reached the 9th.grade in the playing of Piano(如果你想表达的是:我现在已经达到钢琴九级的话应该这么写and have reached the qualification for the grade nine in piano-playing).Piano is a kind of music(这句话你要表达什么呢?没懂,但你的表达方式肯定不对.).It helps me learn something of (of 改成about)music.Become a piano play is a hard job(Become a piano player is hard).I will be harder and harder to practice it(I would practice it harder and harder) .I believe I can do it.你后面写的有些表达不清,不能确定你要表达什么.
首先,很感谢您能帮我修改这篇作文。我仔细地看了您的回答,现在我还有几个问题想请教您(由于字数限制我将分多次追问,还望您能理解):1、my parents paid a teacher for teaching me playing the piano我想问一下这里为什么用paid;2、Become a piano player is hard.这里become是否需要换成becoming;
抱歉啊,现在才看到你的追问。1、paid是pay的过去式,你想表达的是你小时候父母给你请了一个老师,所以...2、become改成becoming。(becoming a pianist
是主语,is 动词,)
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你写的作文很棒,没有问题
Some people want to be the rich。I thought it is difficult to play the piano。
(would)play the piano in the Musikvereinin Vienna to make the best music for the whole world2、my parents help me please(employee雇佣
) a teacher.3、She told me how to play the piano...
I will play the piano in the Musikvereinin Vienna to make the best music for the whole world. 这句怎么就没有过去式了- -I thought play the piano very difficult也是有错误的,我建议你写 I thought playing the pia...

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