高三短文改错解析一则
高三短文改错解析一则
作者：蔡振全
The zoo has big basket for rubbish. People can throw 1. ________
waste into them. On that Saturday afternoon there 2. ________
are usually a lot of people around the cages which 3. ________
the lovely animals are kept, and last Saturday nobody was 4. ________
there. Mr. Patties was surprised. But he was even much 5. ________
surprised to see few children around the basket near 6. ________
the tiger's cage. He quickly came up and looked over 7. ________
their heads and saw a little rat run about in the basket 8. ________
and looking for food. The rat was afraid and the children 9. ________
were interested in the rat than in the tigers. 10. ________
【答案与解析】
1. basket→baskets。用可数名词复数形式表示类别。2. 去掉 that。此处表示泛指。3. which前 加in或者将which 改为where。关系副词在定语从句中作状语,修饰 are kept。4. and→but 5. much→more。even修饰比较级,此处even more surprised意为"更加惊讶"。 6. few前加a或few改为some。从下文看,在垃圾箱周围站着一些孩子,所以此处表示肯定意义。 7. came→went 8. run→running。用现在分词作saw的宾语补足语,表示当时的情景"小老鼠正跑来跑去"。9. 此行无错。 10. 在interested前加more构成比较级。您所在位置： &
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请改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并
也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Shirley Temple is remembered throughout the world as
little girl, who sang and danced in many films.
1 ________
Shirley Temple began to make films in the age of five,
2 ________
and she was only nine, when she played the part of
3 ________
Heidi. In almost every part of the world that films
4 ________
were seen on TV children and their parents still
5 ________
enjoy Heidi and others films from Shirley Temple.
6 ________
Although she has appeared in a film for over thirty
7 ________
years, her name is still dear to people anywhere.
8 ________
She was later out of the film circles, and others
9 ________
knew her like an excellent woman with the knowledge
10 ________
of world's affairs.
短文改错1 Keys:
1．在little前加不定冠词a
2．in the age应为 at the age，这时age作“年龄”解。
3．本行无错误。play the/ a part作“担当角色”解，这里的定冠词不能改成不定冠词，因为后面有一个限制性的定语，“Heidi这个角色”。但 play a part in the film，这里用不定冠词是指不知道是哪个角色。
4．定语从句的先行词是every part，从它与定语从句的关系分析，不应使用that，而要用关系副词where。
5．本行无错误。不要因为下一行的谓语动词而将were改成现在时，因为定语从句不要求与主句一致。实际上这个动作是指过去，是指当时能通过电视看电影的地方，那时的电视还很不普及。
6．others改成other，这个词做定语时不能用复数。
7．将 appeared改成 disappeared。这是根据实际的情况。
8．anywhere这个词不恰当，应为somewhere。因为全世界并不是每个人都听说过秀兰·邓波。
9．circle一词作“……界”解。它习惯上用复数，前面不加冠词，如 business～，商界，political～，政界。
10．将like改为as，因为as当“做为”讲，而不是like“像”。她退出电影界之后，积极参与政治活动，后来成为一名出色的外交家。
The road is dangerous place. The first danger
on the road is people attitudes. Some people
seem to think that accidents happen to the
other people, never to them. In fact, accidents
can happen to anyone. Careful drivers are
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短文改错解析
作者：文玉荣
If there are much more people in the world, then there 1. ________
must have more food to feed the people. But food is already 2. ________
a serious problem today. One-thirds of the world's population 3. ________
is starving, because there is not enough food. Ten thousand 4. ________
people die of the hunger every day in some parts of the world. 5. ________
So in other parts of the world, people become ill or die because 6. ________
they eat too much food, and they are too fat. Some country 7. ________
have no food, but others have too much, and they throw away. 8. ________
How can tomorrow's world feed its people? The world needs 9. ________
to produce more food than it is now. 10. ________
Nowadays, almost every family have a TV set, and almost 1. ________
everyone likes watching the TV. TV becomes part of our life. 2. ________
TV has many advantages, such as, it informs us the latest 3. ________
news that h it can open our eye, 4. ________
enlarge our knowledge and also helps us to see more about the world. 5. ________
At the same time, it also has some disadvantages. People waste very 6. ________
much time in watching TV and their normal life and work are affect. 7. ________
To those children which spend too much time in watching TV, 8. ________
it can do harm for their sight and health. In a word, we should take 9. ________
the advantage of TV and control our time of watching TV. 10. ________
[答案与解析]
(I) 1. much→more。形容词的比较级修饰的中心词是可数名词people, 此时应该用many表示"... ... 得多"。
2. have→be。此处是"there be"句型。
3. One-thirds→One-third。分数词的构成规则是:分子用基数词,分母用序数词;当分子大于1时,在分母的序数词词尾加"s"。
4. 第一个is→are。本句的主语是指"三分之一的人口",是复数概念,谓语动词应该用复数形式。
5. 去掉第一个the。此处的hunger表泛指,其前面不用定冠词。
6.So→But。此处表转折关系,与上句的"饿死"形成鲜明的对比。
7. country→countries。由句子的谓语动词have可知,此处的名词应该用复数形式。
8. throw后面加it。throw away是及物动词性质,应该有宾语。
9. 本行无错。
10. is→does。does指代的是动词produces。
1. have→has。family被every修饰,指单数,谓语动词用单数。
2. 去掉the。TV在此处表泛指, TV前面不用加定冠词。
3. us后面加of。inform sb. of sth.是固定词组。
4. eye→eyes。此处的名词应该用复数形式。
5. helps→help。open, enlarge 和help是三个并列的谓语动词。
6. very→too。too much修饰名词time,而very much是用来修饰动词的。
7. affect→affected。此处是被动语态。
8. which→who / that。先行词是children,指人,故关系代词应该用who或that。
9. for→to。 do harm to sb.是固定词组,意为"对某人有害"。
10. 本行无错。
Nowadays, many and more people like traveling, for it has 1. ________
many advantages. The first one is that they can both broaden 2. ________
our horizons and expand our scope of the knowledge. This is 3. ________
because when we visit different places, we would surely have 4. ________
different experiences, as meeting different people and 5. ________
taste different food. The second one is relaxation. After a 6. ________
long period of hard work, we need relax and rest. Only in 7. ________
this way can we renew ours energy. In addition, traveling can 8. ________
build our body, for when we travel, we might have to go on foot 9. ________
or climb mountain. This is a good form of exercise. 10. ________
My hometown has changed a lot of in the past five years. First, 1. ________
more high buildings have been appeared, which are modern and 2. ________
beautiful. Many overpasses have been set up, but it has become 3. ________
very conveniently for people to travel. Besides, many families 4. ________
have got cars of their own. People lives here have become 5. ________
rich and colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling 6. ________
on holidays. In my delight, I can taste delicious food from 7. ________
different country such as the food of America, Japan and 8. ________
South Korea. And now, it is easier for me to keep touch 9. ________
with my friends as before, for I can email them from my office. 10. ________
【答案与解析】
(I) 1. many→more。more and more表示"越来越多的"。 2. they→it。it指代traveling。3. 去掉the。knowledge在此处表泛指,其前面不用定冠词。4. would→will。根据上下文的时态,此处应该用一般将来时态。5. as前加such。such as是固定词组,表示列举事物。6. taste→tasting。tasting和meeting是并列关系。7. relax前加to。need在此肯定句中是实义动词,后面接带to的动词不定式。8. ours→our。此处应该用形容词性物主代词作定语。9. 本行无错。10. mountain→mountains。此处的"山"表泛指,应该用名词的复数形式,或在mountain前加a。
(II) 1. 去掉of。a lot是副词性短语,在此处作状语;而a lot of作定语,后面应该有名词。2. 去掉been。appear是不及物动词,不能用于被动语态。3. but→so。此处表因果关系。4. conveniently→convenient。形容词作表语。5. People→People's。此处应该用名词所有格作定语。6. 本行无错。7. In→To。to one's delight是固定词组,意为"令某人高兴的是"。8. country→countries。应该用复数形式来表达"不同的国家"。
9. keep后加in。keep in touch with是固定词组,意为"与......保持联系"。10. as→than。由上一行的easier可知,此处应该用than。
A survey basing on 1,000 students found that half of the pupils and 80% 1. ________
of the middle school students sleeps less than nine hours every night.
2. ________
And too many homework given by school teachers and parents is
3. ________
the main reason. Other reason lies in students' bad habits. Some
4. ________
students, for example, are absent-minded while doing his homework,
5. ________
and some waste their after-class time. The third reason is that some
6. ________
students have to get up early on weekdays to get school far away
7. ________
from home. Experts are calling at schools and parents to cut down on
8. ________
the amount of homework. And students should make a good use of their time. 9. ________
And it would be well if they could choose to study in a nearby school. 10. ________
Yesterday afternoon I went to the Summer Palace. It was happened that I saw 1. ________
a touched event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake. 2. ________
Among them was a family of three. They were taking photo 3. ________
while the girl fell off the boat into the river. She was struggling 4. ________
and her parents cried out, "Help! Help!" That was obvious that they
couldn't 5. ________
swim at all. From nearby, a young man immediately jumped into the water, 6. ________
without taking off his clothes. He quickly swam towards girl, 7. ________
that was already tired out. At last, he carried her to the bank. 8. ________
She was saved! How excited the parents were! They were too excited9. ________
and grateful to the young man that they don't know what to say. 10. ________
[答案与解析]
(I) 1. basing→based。过去分词作定语。 2. sleeps→sleep。本句的主语是pupils和students,谓语动词应该用复数。3. many→much。homework是不可数名词,应该用much修饰。 4. Other→Another。此处指"另一个",而不是指"其它的";others作定语时,常修饰复数名词。5. his→their。此处的代词指代前面的名词"students",故用their。 6. 本行无错。 7. 第二个get后加to。get to意为"到达"。8. at→on。call on是固定词组,意为"号召"。 9. 去掉a。make good use of是固定词组,意为"充分利用"。
10. well→good。well作形容词用时,指"身体好",用在此处不合适。
(II) 1. 去掉was。It happened that...意为"碰巧......",happen是不及物动词,不能用于被动语态。 2. touched→touching。 touched意为"感动的",touching意为"令人感动的"。 3. photo→photos。根据语义判断,此处的名词应该用复数。 4. while→when。when在此处表示动作的突然性。 5. That→It。It作形式主语,that they couldn't swim at all是主语从句。 6. 本行无错。7. girl前加the。此处的girl表特指。8. that→who。who引导非限制性定语从句。 9. too→so。全句使用的是so...that...句型。10. don't→didn't。根据上文情景,此处应该用一般过去时态。
It was very fine when I got up on last Sunday morning. 1.________
So I decided to go for a walk and took some photos in the 2.________
beautiful country. After breakfast, I carried my camera with 3.________
me and set off. Everything went smooth. I enjoyed my trip 4.________
so much that I didn't realize the weather had been turned 5.________
bad. I began to run and it was too late. I was caught 6.________
at the rain and was wet through. I kept on running until 7.________
I get to a bus stop. I stood there waiting a long time for the 8.________
bus, shivering in cold. Shortly after I got home, I had 9.________
high fever, which made me stay in bed for a whole week! 10.________
My mother was born in a small town in Italian. She was three 1. ________
when her parents settle in the USA in 1926. They lived in 2. ________
Chicago, that my grandfather's work was making ice cream. 3. ________
At 16, my mother graduated a high school, went on to a 4. ________
secretarial school , and finally worked as secretary for a 5. ________
railroad company. She was beautiful. When a local photographer 6. ________
used some of her picture in his monthly window display, 7. ________
she was very happily. One of her favorite photos showed her 8. ________
sitting by Lake Michigan. My mother was used 9. ________
to say what she was the most beautiful in the town. 10. ________
[答案与解析]
(I) 1. 去掉on。名词被this, that, next, last等修饰后,其前面一般不用介词。 2. took→take。take与go是并列关系。 3. 本行无错。 4. smooth→smoothly。副词作状语,修饰went。 5.去掉been。turned在此处是系动词,不用被动语态。 6. and→but。此处表转折关系。7. at→in。表达"被雨淋了"时,常用短语be caught in the rain, 介词常用in。8. get→got。根据上下文,此处应该用动词的一般过去时态。9. in→with。shivering with cold意为"冻得浑身发抖",介词with表示原因,意为"由于"。 10. high前加a。have a high fever是固定短语,意为"发高烧"。
(II) 1. Italian→Italy。此处应该用名词,表示国家"意大利"。2. settle→settled。由上下文可知,此处应该用动词的一般过去时态。 3. that→where。where引导非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词Chicago,where在定语从句中作状语,相当于in which。
4. graduated后加from。graduate是不及物动词,表达"毕业于某学校"时,graduate后应该用介词from。 5. secretary前加a。secretary是可数名词,其前面应该有冠词a。 6. 本行无错。7. picture→pictures。some of后的名词应该用复数形式,另外,下文也有提示,橱窗里陈列的照片不止一张。8. happily→happy。这里应该用形容词作表语。 9. 去掉was。本句使用的是"used to + 动词原形",表达"过去常常......"。10. what→that。that引导宾语从句,that只起连接作用,that本身无词义。
The village was always very quiet. The people lived 1. ________
there were busy working in their many field during the day, 2. ________
and went to bed early at night, tiring after a long day's 3. ________
hard work. All of them had lived in a village 4. ________
for all their lives but had never left for less than 5. ________
one day at a time. When they did left, they had to get up 6. ________
early in the morning. They filled their carts of 7. ________
fruit, vegetables and sheep and went the market in the town. 8. ________
They returned back in the evening with things, perhaps 9. ________
presents for their children. That was their life. 10. ________
I have a very embarrassing experience this evening. 1. ________
I saw a man at a bus stop when I was on my way back 2. ________
home. Though I saw him from behind, but I was sure he was 3. ________
a friend of mine whom I hadn' t seen him for a long time. I gave 4. ________
him a tap on the shoulders with my umbrella and shouted to 5. ________
him at the same time. He turned round, completely taking by 6. ________
surprise. Unfortunately, he was my friend but a complete 7. ________
stranger. He was terribly embarrassed, for I didn't know 8. ________
how to explain him. I could only say in a low voice, "I'm so 9. ________
sorry, sir." After that I walked away as quickly as possibly. 10. ________
[答案与解析]
(I) 1. lived→living或在lived前加who。此处应改为现在分词作定语或定语从句。2. field→fields。根据语义,此处应该用名词复数fields。 3. tiring→tired。 tired意为"劳累的",而tiring意为"累人的"。4. a→the。此处的village是第二次出现,应该用定冠词表特指。 5. less→more。根据上下文语义,此处应该用not more than表示"不超过"。 6. left→leave。助动词did后应该用动词原形,did表强调。 7. of→ with。fill...with是固定短语。8. went后加to。他们车上装满了水果、蔬菜和羊,到镇上的市场上去卖。 9. 去掉back。return意为"返回", back属于多余用词。10. 本行无错。
(II) 1. have→had。由下文可知,本篇短文叙述的是过去发生的事情,故用动词的一般过去时态。 2. 本行无错。3. 去掉but。 状语从句中使用了Though, 主句中就不能再用连词but。 4. 去 掉him。 whom在定语从句中作 hadn't seen的宾语,him属重复用词。 5. shoulders →shoulder。由 a tap可知,此处指在肩膀上拍了一下,shoulder应该用单数形式。 6. taking → taken。be taken by surprise是固定短语,意为"大吃一惊"。此处的taken是过去分词,该短语作状语。 7. was后加 not。由下文可知,是作者认错人了。 8. He→I。此处应表达"我很难堪"。 9. explain后加to。 表达"向某人解释"时,应该用explain to sb.。10. possibly → possible。 as...as possible是固定短语,意为"尽量......; 尽可能......"。
It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in the sky. 1. ________
I went for boating by myself. I didn't take any friend with me 2. ________
because I wanted to be alone. I hired a boat and rowing slowly 3. ________
to a center of the lake. A fresh breeze was blowing, 4. ________
fish were swimming and birds were singing. While I reached 5. ________
the center, I took up the paddles(桨)and laid down in the boat. 6. ________
With the blue sky over me or green water around me, 7. ________
I was extremely relaxed. Over two hour passed in this way 8. ________
before I knew it. I came back home very lately. I didn't feel 9. ________
tired at all, for I had really had good time. 10. ________
In July 20, 1969, Neil Armstrong walked on the surface of 1. ________
the moon. He saw that the ground was hard and there were 2. ________
lots of dust that looked as gray powder. He traveled from 3. ________
the earth in a spaceship calling ApolloⅡ. Then, while it stayed 4. ________
in the space and moved around the moon, he climbed into 5. ________
a small lunar module (登月舱). It brought him to the moon. 6. ________
He spent three hours pick up moon rocks. 7. ________
After that, he set equipment to measure the temperature 8. ________
and wind on the moon. After he finished his works, 9. ________
he planted an American flag in the ground. 10. ________
[答案与解析]
(I) 1. 本行无错。2. 去掉for。go doing是常用的固定词组。3. rowing → rowed。hired和rowed是由and连接的两个并列的谓语动词。4. a → the。center后面有限制性定语修饰,其前面应该用定冠词。5. While → When / As。当while引导时间状语从句时,从句中的谓语动词应该用延续性动词,而非终止性动词。 6. laid → lay。动词lie表"躺"时的过去式是lay, laid是动词lay的过去式。 7. or → and。此处并非表转折关系。 8. hour → hours。可数名词hour前有数词two的修饰,故名词应该用复数形式。 9. lately → late。副词late意为"晚";副词lately意为"近来"。 10. good前加a。have a good time为固定词组。
(II) 1. In → On。在表示具体的日期前,应该用介词on。2. were → was。dust是不可数名词,谓语动词应该用单数。 3. as → like。look like是固定词组,意为"看起来像"。 4. calling → called。该分词与所修饰的名词之间是动宾关系,故此处用过去分词作定语。 5. 去掉第一个the。space前一般不用冠词。 6. brought → took。此处指"带去",而不是"带来"。 7. pick → picking。spend time (in) doing sth. 是固定句型。 8. set后面加up。set up是固定词组,意为"安放"。 9. works → work。 work意为"工作"时,是不可数名词。10. 本行无错。更多频道内容在这里查看
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